
The Lovely Bones as I read was a movie filled with inspiration and sadness.
Susie Salmon (like the fish) was killed during the 70's and had been murdered by her neighbor. Although she was murdered a part of her did not want to leave to Heaven. Susie wanted to revenge her death and knew everything about what was going in the real world. Susie was stuck in the middle. Not making it completely dead or alive she wondered around seeing little pieces of other little girls who went through the same thing she had gone through. Susie since still had some connection to the real world, gives clues to her father who was the one who killed her. Susie wants to leave the world but a part of her wants the truth to be revealed about her killer. Susie sees her killer everyday and goes about seeing what others are doing since she's been gone. One day her killer gets the urge to kill another since his memory of killing Susie was fading. Susie realizes that who he now wants to kill is her younger sister. Her younger sister senses the killer around her , stocking her, staring at her. One day her younger sisters decides to look for evidence that this neighbor was the one who killed Susie. She finds a book with his plan of killing Susie and clipped news papers with photos of her to. In the end Susie leaves to go to Heaven finally revealing who her murder was and their family were also at peace living their lives, still loving their unforgotten daughter. This movie was awesome and it made me open my eyes to allot of things in my life. Susie died at a young age and that is what bothered me the most. She did not get to experience, or make more memories. I on the other hand have lived longer than her and I love my life, because I've experience many happy things. Well Heaven is the maximum to me and at least she was gone to a better and lovelier place.
http://movies.nytimes.com/2009/12/11/movies/11lovelybones.html







I heard that Peter Jackson, director of the Lord of the Rings films, created this movie. I really have to read the book. Now for your writing....
ReplyDelete"I on the other hand have lived longer than her/she and I love my life, because I've experience many happy things."
1. Is the right pronoun she or her? Back your finding up with the rule and tell me about it.
2. Why did you put a comma before because. If there is no rule for why you did it (check the compact comma summary sheet), then make it go away.
3. "Things" is a horribly vague word. Avoid it/